Look-A-Bridge presents: Another My Hero Academia Abridged 2.0
Ciarand45 for All Might
the greatest hero of all time and also thinks he's an extremely cool dad when in his flex mode. When in normal form he's actually a bumbling alcoholic. Looking for a deeper male voice.
Oh yeah kids. I know all about the facetubes and snapbooks. So you can't pull the wool over my eyes.
*burps* listen kid. Normally I am some big famous hero but at the end of the day I'm just a normal guy. I now realized I used normal twice in the same sentence. *burps*
HAHAHAHAHA of course I know what that is. What do you think I am? Old?
You have a lot of enthusiasm in your voice, your inflection was very good. My suggestion for you is to add a bit more energy in the last line.
Tone: Good. Inflection: Needs work. you need to put more focus on what parts of your line is a joke. Pitch: Good