Okay I liked it but here are some ways you can improve it when you say "ah how chivalrous" I've put ah to show that's how it sounds but she's kinda screaming no not screaming but you get what I mean right it's not her speaking it's almost like a yelp I guess I dunno and with the other two lines for number #2 She's actually worried for Deku so she needs to sound more scared and desperate at this moment and for the 3rd line she slips back into referee mode and shouts excitedly hope this helps you and that you reaudition