The third line was a bit tricky for me because I felt it was awkwardly written. This happens a lot with my auditions when the writing doesn't live up to the emotional intensity it's trying to convey and therefore it's hard to act the line out. I see why this would happen, because as you said, prior to this project your works haven't been very serious and you're inexperienced with heavier and more emotionally intense dialogue. I know you're only accepting auditions for voice actors, but I'd love to help you write some of the game as well. I auditioned for both Moreison and Ian and I didn't really make a significant difference in their voices, so I'll only be able to do one role. Sorry ;w;