Emerald City: The Rise of Eros - Episode 2 (Voice Actors)
Arché for Writer
We’re looking for talented writers who excel at creating deeply engaging characters and crafting realistic, in-depth dialogue. If you have a passion for storytelling and an eye for developing rich personalities, we want you to join our team.
- Ideal candidates will be skilled in:
- Character Design: Crafting well-rounded, unique characters with strong motivations and traits.
- Personality Development: Developing characters that feel authentic, relatable, and multidimensional.
- Dialogue: Writing dialogue that reflects each character's personality, background, and emotions.
- Realistic Dialogue: Creating conversations that feel natural, nuanced, and emotionally resonant.
- Conflict & Resolution: Building internal and external conflicts that drive character development and plot progression. If you have a knack for creating compelling characters and dialogue that brings stories to life, we would love to see your work.
- Macro World building, character decisions
Join us in shaping unforgettable narratives!
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When talking about suicide and mental health, I wish the story had been more realistic and relatable. It could have explored the characters’ pasts in a way that helped the audience connect with them. Instead, the scenes felt too simple, with monotone emotions, basic dialogue, and surface-level interactions with death. This made it harder to connect with the story, especially in two areas. I found myself tuning out and unfocused:
Suicide: The topic wasn’t handled thoughtfully. There’s no mention of solutions, hope, or seeking help, which are important parts of this conversation.
Death’s Role: Instead of being a meaningful part of the story about redemption, the interaction with death felt flat and lacked depth.
Overall, the story was missing emotional connections, subtlety, and creativity. It felt predictable at times. While it’s clear the writer had strong feelings about the topic, those feelings didn’t fully come through in the story.Emerald City requires careful attention to these elements and displays a "show-don't-tell"
Hi, unfortunately I don't know how to use the site well, otherwise I would have written that I don't have much experience in writing if not on my own, I often review what I write to understand what I can improve, what I wrote is incomplete, you can see how it stops at a certain point. However, I appreciate that you read and gave me your opinion on the matter and I will treasure it to improve even more. Thank you very much and have a good evening or day. :3