[PAID] The Great Disney Games - story dub, group 2
Lumina for Charlotte La Bouff
Heiress to the La Bouff family fortune and princess at heart from New Orleans. Known as "Lottie" to her friends, she serves as support staff during the competitors' downtime, providing her charges with whatever creature comforts she can muster with a crash course in interior decorating.
- english
- animation/character
- female young adult
- louisiana
"Raps, can I call you Raps? You and are I two halves of a long-separated set. Let's just ignore your fake mother throwing a wrench into everything."
"The duck may swim in the lake but my Daddy owns the lake. He also tried to own the ducks but don't tell 'em that."
"It's not slime, you reprobate, Sprig here is covered in mucus. And there ain't nothing wrong with that."
Thank you for the submission, Charlotte sounds like a Southern Twilight Sparkle :). I would recommend slowing down just a bit to let her dialogue be a little more audible; I'd also recommend speaking a bit more loudly as even with headphones in she comes off as a bit too whispery.
Wait, why can't I see this publicly anymore?
Taking the criticism into consideration, I plan to rerecord another submission if time permits. I've put it to private as to shelve this in a way so I can make one that I feel much happier with!
I thought the submission was good, I was just offering some observations for the future in the event you were chosen. You're free to send in another submission, though the deadline having passed may block you. Or not, I got thirteenth-hour submissions before so I have no idea how things work.
Oh man, I forgot to check the deadline, haha. I think I can still send in auditions after the deadline, but I'm a little busy this weekend so I guess another submission won't be feasible for me at this time. Thank you for the criticism though!