Gotham City Sirens Issue#1 Comic Dub
Seth Botwin for The Riddler
Anything I can put as a description would be an insult to this man's intelligence. Edward Nigma, AKA The Riddler, is a true mental rival to The Batman. He's one of the smartest men alive and he knows it!
Give an original take here.
"I have billions of eyes, yet live in darkness. I have millions of ears, yet only four lobes. I have no muscle, yet rule two hemispheres? What am I?"
"I can start a war or end one. I can give you the strength of heroes or leave you powerless. I might be snared with a glance, but no force can compel me to stay. What am I?"
"If you're open to a bit of advice, I'd suggest you cease, if not desist. The Batman will be here any moment, and I see no reason to add another homicide to your resume."
I do like the Mysterious Vibe you give the Riddler here. Ya did a good job with that. I think you could make him a bit more confident/Cocky In the delivery. Also the audio quality is decent but the background noise is distracting for sure. Clean that up sound more confident and you have something Nice here.
Thank you for the notes, I will try to add a sense of confidence and work on the background noise reduction. Would you like me to resubmit through the audition system or a direct email to you?