Gotham City Sirens Issue#1 Comic Dub
Gerhard Netemeyer for The Riddler
Anything I can put as a description would be an insult to this man's intelligence. Edward Nigma, AKA The Riddler, is a true mental rival to The Batman. He's one of the smartest men alive and he knows it!
Give an original take here.
"I have billions of eyes, yet live in darkness. I have millions of ears, yet only four lobes. I have no muscle, yet rule two hemispheres? What am I?"
"I can start a war or end one. I can give you the strength of heroes or leave you powerless. I might be snared with a glance, but no force can compel me to stay. What am I?"
"If you're open to a bit of advice, I'd suggest you cease, if not desist. The Batman will be here any moment, and I see no reason to add another homicide to your resume."
The vibe I get here is a Straight to the Point Riddler. One that has that crazy side to him but is holding that back. The voice is well done. Only thing I'd change is. When I think of Riddler I think of a character not matter which version that's Beyond smart and full of himself a little because of that. Incorporating that could go a long way for you but overall I'm pleased with this audition. You may re audition after this feedback or not up to you this was a great job though
Thank you! Also, you're totally right; I'm working on the new submission right now.