Gotham City Sirens Issue#1 Comic Dub
PogyVA for The Riddler
Anything I can put as a description would be an insult to this man's intelligence. Edward Nigma, AKA The Riddler, is a true mental rival to The Batman. He's one of the smartest men alive and he knows it!
Give an original take here.
"I have billions of eyes, yet live in darkness. I have millions of ears, yet only four lobes. I have no muscle, yet rule two hemispheres? What am I?"
"I can start a war or end one. I can give you the strength of heroes or leave you powerless. I might be snared with a glance, but no force can compel me to stay. What am I?"
"If you're open to a bit of advice, I'd suggest you cease, if not desist. The Batman will be here any moment, and I see no reason to add another homicide to your resume."
Voice is good but.... the tone is off. This sounds too heroic to me. Riddler is a sarcastic know it all who believes hes the BEST at intelligence. Try to convey that but with this voice. It also sounded like you were just reading off a script and not fully committing here. Its a good voice for sure but needs some touch ups in the tone department
Thank you for the feedback! I kinda took some mixed inspiration from Batman TAM and the Arkham games, but that might not have helped in my favor. I'll definitely take your advise into account and work on this again.