SPIDER-MAN: BEHIND THE MASK OF LIES
rickdoesvo for Mary Jane Watson
Peter’s soulmate. Mary Jane has adopted in an optimistic and relaxed outlook on life. Although slightly cheeky and overconfident at times, she is more emotionally secure. Her sense of adventure and exploration is also apparent, but her ongoing competitiveness and rigid approach to grave situations remain, she is generally more spirited and playful and loves to goof around with Peter.
- english
- Rational
- Dutiful
- female teen
- american
- Self assured
- Cheeky
- laid back
- female young adult
MJ: Well, Connors is right you know. (Peter: really? You think we should…?) oh god no! We’re nowhere NEAR ready for that, (Peter: yeah…that’s crazy…) MJ: what I meant was all of THIS, the more you’re known across the city the bigger of a target you are, it’s a toxic way of life believe me, you’re already quite pathetic on your own.
(projected) Oh, so this is where you come to get away from Connors? I mean, at least pick a better view, I'd rather serve community hours than to even lay an eye on Staten Island!
Well, you’re right, you’re back to where you started, but I was the first to believe in you, and I’ve seen you doubt yourself whether you’re worthy to go on ever since, and you wanna know something? I’m the person I am today because of you, I never told you that but it’s true, you are the bravest, most determined, most stubborn dumbass I know.
I like it so far, but what it needs is more emotion, this version of MJ is more expressive. For the first two lines, MJ delivers them in a teasing manner whether the last one is a sort of speech, so she would say it in a “hey, I’m here for you” kind of way, love your first delivery of these lines, but would you mind would redo the lines?
I've just uploaded another file with the direction you gave, but if it is still not right I would be happy to do another, let me know!