The Terra Arcanum Chronicles: The Audio Drama Ep 2-3
Guthrie for Cay'ln
Cay'ln is a young half elven man who has blindly followed the Order of Divinusex since he was a young boy, unaware of the true horrors behind the scenes. Really looking for someone who can nail the emotions behind the character.
Cay'ln has the potential to return later on in the story!
- english
(Standing guard, shocked)Halt! State you name and business being here!
(Politely) I don’t mean to interrupt. It’s just, I thought I heard screaming earlier, from below...
(Heartbroken to anger)I... I believed in you! Believed in the cause! To think... All this time, you were the real monster!
Not a bad start. I think it's just missing that raw emotion, especially in the last lines. This is a young man who's whole life purpose has just been revealed to be a sham. His emotions should be heard !
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