Frog Raccoon Strawberry: The Animated Series
lizzie_grace for Pippi Possum
Pippi Possum is a stereotypical mean girl. She constantly harasses Strawberry in hopes of making her their rival. She also has a thing for fishsticks... but that's neither hear nor there.
[You're dating the crush of your rival out of sheer spite. She stumbles upon you cuddling up against him and you can't help but take this opportunity to gloat] Are We Dating? Why, yes. I, Pippi Possum, am dating Josh Lotor.
[You just challenged your rival to a game of extreme hopscotch, completely oblivious to the fact that your rival has frog powers making her able to jump to friggin' space] "Holy Frick! She's Hopping the CRAP out of that scotch!"
[You challenge your rival to a wizard's duel. Filled to the brim with confidence, you once gloat about how you've spent a year at a wizard's school and that you're going to win] "I've spent the past year as a mary sue, so I'm totes ready to win! Totally Totes!"
Not bad. The voice is fine, but I feel like your line-reads lack emotion. Specifically in line 2. You just watched somebody launch themselves into the goddamn sky. I think that warrants a much more EXCITED reaction.