Frog Raccoon Strawberry: The Animated Series
AzUrArInG for Josh Lotor
Josh is a good guy. He's the leader of a band called "Rugburn Samurai" and he's the on-again-off-again love interest of Strawberry Fields. He wants to win Strawberry's affection but fails to see that she only sees herself as a frog and not a raccoon. He can be a bit emotional and tends to cry at the slightest hint of rejection. Despite that, he's still a nice kid.
[You just found out that your best friend has been telling the girl that has a crush on you to stay away from you. You're borderline pissed off] "What was all that business about Strawberry having to stay away from me, Marco?"
[You just got rejected by a girl that you've had a crush on, on Valentine's day. You're trying to recuperate but the tears start to flow.] "Okay, Strawberry. Maybe Next Time. I've got to get back to band practice. We're an Emo band and I'm properly miserable now..."
[You just got through showing some demos to your band after being dumped twice by two different girls. The band loves the demos and asks for your secret. In a depressed tone, you give a straight answer] "Well... Ever since my luck with girls has gone so sour, I've been absolutely miserable, you see..."
Much better. I definitely sense a lot more control in the first two line reads. The read on line two is better but got a little overdramatic at the end. The third read is okay, it still feels a bit too brooding. Still, good job.