The enunciation on the words were great! I can definitely feel the frustration though I am getting mixed signals of what you're trying to emphasize

I really do like the way the words are delivered. Forgive me if I'm wrong, but this sounds like you have spliced together different takes. Your anger of the situation shines through!

Ooh, love this read! You take your time not just for the sake of a slower read, but you instead use that extra time to give a ton of extra emphasis to your speech. There are many times where I felt the power and sheer emotion behind your words. And you do it in a way that isn't fake; it's a natural build-up, and each phrase feels separately unique from each other. The frustration present here is so good that I'm honestly so shocked! REALLY well done! I don't have much criticism, some of your words blended together in the middle through the frustrated tone, but I didn't mind much at all. Keep this up for your auditions, I am thoroughly impressed! It was a pleasure having you in class! ~Joe