I really liked the nostalgic feeling you gave this reading, it had the same feeling as a movie or show intro where the main character is talking about their childhood.

You are definitely doing a great job at applying the feedback! And please, accents are amazing tools, and your toolbox is bigger than most because of it. My favorite part of the read was your smile and how it enhanced your overall tale of this "Mrs. Mary Nilimore" character. I think more of this would help a lot, applying even more of that varied emphasis and emotion! Articulation is definitely getting better, keep up that great focus and fantastic pacing. Your pronunctiation was slightly off with "nostertium," we need to hear the "sh" part more in the middle of the word. Very nicely done!