I could tell you were focusing on your articulation, but your "T" sounds were still heavily under-articulated. "Peter, "bed," "teetered," and even "that" at the very end were examples of lacking in both "t" and "d." It's very easy to mix up these two sounds, so keep practicing this read to understand the difference more naturally. Your pacing was a bit fast, so taking your time may also help with this. Overall, I think this read works, but could be much more interesting to listen to with a better focus on clarity. Keep up the good work!