The Terra Arcanum Chronicles: The Audio Drama Ep 1
CoreyVA for Carson Davis
This is a minor character who will reoccur with small parts in the future.
Carson is Adam's best friend, and the one who gets him into New Horizons. He is a charming reporter for a tech news site, who spends more time focused on chatting up the eye candy of the party and less time focused on the actual job. However he still manages to come out with amazing articles.
(Confidently)
Carson Davis, with Tomorrow's Tech, Today. And this is Adam Kelly, my plus one.
(Almost smug like. Like he just disproved his friend)
Ye have little faith Adam... Her name is Liz and we are going out next Saturday, thank you very much!
(Afraid and injured)
He... He said he wanted to fix us... Wanted us to submit to the rule of his god... And when he deemed us unredeemable, that's when he... (painful grunt) That's when he...
I like this, some notes I have, the pause between Tomorrow's Tech, Today, is a bit drawn out, it's the name of the News Site he works for. The second line could use a bit more smug, almost arrogance to it, almost like he one a bet that he couldn't get the date. And the final line, you have the scared part down, if we could get a bit more pain in the voice from physical wounds, I think it would be money.
Thank you for the feedback! I'll have another take for you tomorrow with the information in mind.