The Terra Arcanum Chronicles: The Audio Drama Ep 1
PattySparks for Victor Osborn
This is a significant character who will end up playing a far larger role in the future.
Victor Osborn is the CEO of New Horizons, a charming 30 something capable of turning an enemy into his friend. But can someone appearing to be so selfless and charming really be as good as everyone thinks he is?
(Giving a Speech)
Thank you everyone so much for coming out here tonight to witness history. So first, a little about myself. My father started this company many years ago on the idea of not just creating the latest and greatest technology, but also making sure he could leave the world a better place than he found it. Pops had one dream he spent all his life trying to realize, one that I’m sure some of our guests might not appreciate.
(Continuing his speech)
He had a vision of clean, green, renewable energy. And not just for the rich folk, but for everyone. Sadly, my father passed away far before his vision was realized. And it is with great honor that I am here tonight with you all, to see that vision realized!
(Angry, yelling)
Don't you get it?! I am trying to save this world! By any means necessary! You can either join me, or get the hell out of my way!
Hmm, I think the delivery and tone of the first attempt is better. If I had any really pointers here it would be this: Victor is obviously a charming individual. His presentation should feel more comfortable, like he's talking to someone in normal conversation, whereas currently it comes off as someone reading from a teleprompter with the frequent pauses. I hope this helps in some way!