Also, reading the script as written with entrée fee was pretty funny.

Your audio quality sounds amazing, I'm so jelly!

Love your energy! The projection feels solid here, although part of me thinks that there was just a bit too much "shouting" as opposed to projection (but I am REALLY nitpicking there). The energy is what sells this read, and the best part is that your articulation feels great despite the powerful voice. From what I heard, the pacing was the key bridge to connecting your energy/power with your clarity in words. Keep that up, this was a really good take!