Nice read! I can tell you are trying to focus on projection and articulation, which is great. I do think you could be putting more passion into the projection aspect of the read; at the moment, it doesn't sound like you are speaking from the gut enough. This can be hard to achieve, and it's something we will continue to work on and talk about, but the goal is to truly fill the entire space with your voice. Your energy is great! It really sets a nice, friendly tone. Add in a bit more of a smile, and I think you'll be set in that regard. Well done!