I love your pacing here!You took your time from start to finish. I also liked the little ad-libs you added, and your inflections really helped bring your read to life! From here, I recommend working on your projection. I don't just mean volume here; I mean speaking from your abs and your gut to try and "fill up space" as you speak through the monologue. Also, you ocassionally sped up your pacing and mumbled, especially near the later half of the read. Keep all of this in mind for next week, articulating and projecting both. Great job overall!