I like the energy and the tone you established from the very beginning! Make sure each of your breaths is calculated and planned because there were just a couple that stuck out to me a little bit as a tad off. Keep practicing articulation so we can hear those words "West Brom-wich" "Rhud-d-lan" it was sort of hard to hear these words but just keep practicing! You're doing fine. Way to go!

Your voice is very soothing! I also think your pacing was great. The way you phrased some of the lines, especially in the second half was really unique to this read. It made me wonder who you pictured as your audience? It all sounded very natural to me while remaining engaging. I think Burgers feedback covers the few spots I had trouble understanding. Overall, fantastic job!