I love that your annunciation stayed on point despite the very exaggerated voice you used for this one! The pacing was also nice and slow so I could really follow along with the story. There were a few times where it seemed like you got lost with the script in terms of where a sentence was going, and I think it would have been totally okay to go back and try the sentence again. I'm looking forward to reading whatever feedback our instructors have on your unique voice choice! Great read

Ahhhh so we're finally here sorry it so long to find you. Great performance, like the emotion and tenderness you are portraying in your voice. This was a very interesting decision for a voice choice I get the feeling someone much older is recalling memories here. I do think your articulation, while solid overall, could use a bit more focus. I like your pacing, but I do feel like it felt like it was in the same area for most of your read. I feel like you can add some more feeling into this read, try smiling more when talking about tender moments like the things you use to eat. Plaster a big, huge smile over your face while you read so the line feels more personal. Emoting is very important I want you to showcase that, what memories made you sad? What memories made you happy? What memories left you confused; I want to be able to tell all of the things from just the sound of your voice. Still, this was nicely done! Nice work!