Oh my god, the accent on the headlines was a nice touch. I definitely liked the natural build up in this read. Like it starts out very samey like any other live show would, then it speeds up with every new play of the game. It got me excited to know more, got me engaged more with the read. Keep this pacing for other projects like it. It's good. You also enunciate way better than me. (Damn, I think everybody does.) I like your read of this script. Very lively.

I like the character you are portraying a lot! It's a unique performance with a lot of fun energy. It does fall a bit back to your regular voice at times, but I congratulate you for taking this script and getting out of your comfort zone. Still this is very engaging and very fun, ESPECIALLY once we get to the "plays"! I want to hear a similar variation in energy earlier on. Aside from that though, I really love the performance, and I think with that added natural variation and with a tad more articulation, you'd be 100% set! Well done.