love your voice. diction was really good. it was clear without being over-articulated. well done.

I personally can't hear the difference between the noise gate and without. In fact, I think the noise gate reduced the impact of one of the "T"s you enunciated, which kinda defeats the purpose of this exercise as we're trying to over enunciate. Another thing, I definitely want to hear what it sounds like when you MEGA project your voice. I bet it would sound incredible.

You nailed enunciation!

I think you were going just a bit too fast. I like the energy, and the fast pacing does help with this, but it makes the words blur together too much and I don't quite feel that proper enunciation that I wanted to feel from this. Slow it down and keep that same energy while also making sure you speak each word as clearly as possible your speaking to children make sure they can follow what you're saying. Always try to remember your audience, who's this for, how should it sound, this is a story for children try to add a bit more of that natural excitement to keep them engaged all the way through. Still was done very well I look forward to your next submission.