Great narration. Good breath control, and very clear.

Well read! Your inflections made the read engaging and easy to follow.

Loved your energy.

This was one of the best reads, however; it's missing a crucial detail. There was no "the end" at the end. This sounded like a storybook being read to me. The only real way to end a storybook is tell the kids, "The End." Very good, very entrancing read.

I like that it sounded like a kind librarian reading to the group. Very clear and with an idea about the point of the story.

This feels like I'm a little kid listening to our teacher reading to the class. Your voice is so calming yet so filled with energy this was a great read!

This was wonderful, reminds me of the storytime podcasts my little one listens to. Super clear, great pacing.

Fantastic over-articulation! Make sure you don't let up on that going forward, especially for the homework. It feels crisp and well-enunciated. I do believe more energy would help to connect with your listeners, as this is meant to be a narration for children. I want to FEEL that passion and hear the smile in your voice! Minor criticism from but overall, keep up the articulation while enhancing the energy levels. Good job!