you actually made sense out of this script!! good job.

Thank you for making my dumb butt realize that I've been pronouncing ghoul wrong my entire life. I also like your laugh. Some things I noticed. When you messed up at "re-animated", next time redo the whole sentence instead of saying the word again correctly. And your enunciation of "fashionably" was a little slurred but other than that I loved your energy here!

Damn Gertrude, you gotta lay off them smokes. Hehe Now I really wish you were there with Colton and I when we were reading it late at night and I gave my read an accent too. My submission doesn't have an accent, but I'm glad to hear that I wasn't the only one that thought this script needed a particular voice.

you did this is one edit?? That's amazing you did awesome! Love the voice you did for this!

Such fun! I like the energy but make sure the words don't blur together too much. I don't quite feel that proper enunciation that I wanted to feel from this. There were some parts where you stumbled a bit you don't have to power through take a breath pause and start again. Make sure to keep that same energy while also making sure you speak each word as clearly as possible. There was also a lack of proper pronunciation at the end (Kilagub guilded Dung Beetle); make sure you practice any tough new words as much as possible before recording, as this will be a dead giveaway that you are inexperienced to a new client. Good job overall though, just keep practicing! Here's a Burger for your good work 🍔