Are You Still There
GrandMasterElby for Echo/David
The Echo speaks with a hollow friendliness and when its obviously not working, it has rage in its voice.
Hello? Are you there? Where are you? Hello?
Arthur its simply pointless to continue hiding. Aren't you tired of this game we play?
I promise you won't feel a thing. David didn't. Regardless of what his screams sounded like.
I could definitly feel the rage in this voice, be careful of where you said "tired" and "regardless" as the audio peaked in an uncomfortable way. I'm not holding that against you however. The rage was good but I didn't want it quite as much as you were giving, I wanted more hollowness, but when I did hear hallow, it isn't quite what I'm looking for. I think its good for you though that my criticism is that you are too good at emotional voices.
Thank you for the honest critique. I appreciate the leniency regarding the audio peaking as well as I'm quite new in the voice acting field, so I'll keep a closer eye on that going forward. If you would like, I'd be happy to submit another take utilizing the changes you noted. Otherwise I greatly appreciate the consideration and criticism and look forward to seeing the result of this project and others you do in the future!