I didn't notice the breaths honestly. Wasn't trying to listen for them anyhow. This read has some solid pacing and everything I heard, I heard clearly.

so smooth!!! I love how your voice flows:D

great flow, such a good take!

Thank you everyone! It's nice to receive feedback 😄

Make sure your words stand out from one another! Instead of "Serviceselection," I want to hear "service selection." The voice and tone are good, although I think its asking for just a bit more energy through projection. The smile is definitely there though, so absolutely make sure you keep that! So yeah, definitely a good read, but more energy (while not increasing the pace) would really sell this one I believe. Good job!