Overlord Abridged: Episode 1
LilaShines for Aura Bello Fiore
Classic tomboy GF. She's quirky, energetic, and tough when she wants to be. But she also takes pride in her more feminine aspects as well, and can get a little flustered if someone pushes her buttons the right way. She's also a bit of a tease when it comes to the other Flor Guardians, especially Shalltear and Mare.
Lord Momonga! Welcome to the Amphitheater! Apologies, my lord. Had I known you'd be visiting, I'd have tried to clean up the place a little.
(She should sound like she's threatening/warning Mare about the Special Wand. Also, Chaguma is supposed to be CHA-goom-ah rather than Cha-GOOM-ah, ya know? Hope that helps :) )
Mare! Get your ass down here this instant! Don't make me use Lord Chaguma's Special Wand again!!That was a blast, Lord Momonga! I gotta admit, I that thing was a lot harder to kill than I expected.
Digging it so far! My only note would be to maybe try adding a little more energy to certain lines, or just variation to how you speak some lines. Some of the deliveries felt a little identical at times. Hope that helps :)
Yeah! I can resubmit if you like!
That'd be grand if its no trouble :) Also, for future reference, Mare is pronounced Mar-REY lol