The Mistress Fox-Thief: SHIRO [Motion Comic Mini-Series]
Zakkylikesvoicingstuff for Terry

Terry is his down on his luck late teenager. His dad's an out of touch dork, his new (used) car is still under repairs and he had not much luck for it, and he works at a dead end office space job.
One day he encounter the ever exciting and talent Shiro Fox as she entered his life and drags him along to her amazing adventures as a companion.
Terry is neurotic, cowardly, but has an underlined righteous sense of responsibility and helps others in need. Even going as far as to give away the last bit of money to help a woman he just met to get a sandwich. He can insecure about his self and does selfish acts to look "cool" or "impressive" towards his co-workers, friends and his father,
the basis I want with his voice be similar to Ilan Mitchell-Smith from the film "Weird Science" but I'm giving you full creative range of his accent, and personality to make the character your own and beyond.
[Annoyed internal monologue]
Ain’t life a kick in the pants? Today was supposed to be my day off! A day to unwind, to reflect on my life choices… to NOT deal with “Tails Towers” for 24 beautiful hours! ...but, gotta do what the boss-man says “Get your ass over here or your fired!”[Out loud, in shock]
Laaaay-deeee!?
[Speechless internal, almost in a "Jerry Lewis" like tone]
Lady! Pretty lady! Nice lady with the coat of fur and the dress of black! Pretty in face for all to see![Exhausted internally]
There’s no way today actually happened, right? Fox ladies, ninjas… ugh! Maybe I’m just working too hard… I just need sleep. Yeah, that’s it. I just need sleep. And when I wake up, everything will be just as it always be.

Sorry. What kind of microphone do you use? The quality isn't what we're looking for, the volume seems to be peaking alot, and the line reads doesn't sound natural. It's not what I'm looking for but I appreciate the audition.
Heya, by peaking you mean Clipping right? And yeah i'll work on it again, still a beginner but ill try doubly hard if you give me another chance ^^ also the mic is a bm 800

Yes, I was referring to the clipping. I suggest set the Mic volume by at least 30 and the boost at 0.0 db. Despite that, this microphone at best is used for at least vlogs or livestream but not for voice acting. That just my opinion based on what I researched on your mic.
Nod Nod, I'll try my best anyway, thank you for feedback ^^