Creawell: An Original Storyboard Series
kikfa for Eloise Magalimov
Eloise Magalimov is an immigrant from Russia and a victim of being heavily mistreated as a child by her mother. She is 24 years old and stands at around 5'8. She is your seemingly standard "No-nonsense, only work" type of gal who takes her job very seriously and makes sure that her personal life does not get into the way of her work. She is first introduced as being rather cold and dismissive of other peoples interactions towards her. She is a workaholic, an incredible realist, intelligent and witty. Her delivery needs to be very blunt and serious during the beginning of her arc. The audience slowly learns that she is a person with cold hands, yet has a warm heart. She does not wish for anyone to go through the same pain she had to suffer to which is why she joined the FBI. As we go through her arc, she learns to break out of her shell and to not bottle up her feelings while also openly expressing her emotions towards others.
Since Eloise is originally from Russia I would REALLY prefer if she had a Russian accent, doesn't have to be too over the top, it can be very slight, but then again the accent isn't required. Her delivery, as stated before, can be very blunt, but nothing too robotic. As she grows throughout the story, she can sound more sympathetic and warm. There may be a possibility that she will speak some dialogue in Russian, although it will be only a few words.
Magalimov is pronounced (Muh-gah-lee-moff)
(Introducing) "Agent Eloise Magalimov. I work with the FBI... Now, Mr. Ontario, I'd like to have a few words with you revolving around this recent case. Save yourself the time and don't try to stall on your answers. I'd like you to get straight to the point so we can end this as soon as possible for you. Now, any questions before we start?"
(Flashback scene, Teen Eloise, Horrified) "Elias...? (Screams) ELIAS!" (Evolve into hysteria, about 10 seconds of screams, no's, whatever works for you.)
(Sympathetic, Reassuring) "Are you Meghan? Okay... I'm Eloise, I'm here to help you get out of here okay, sweetie? Your parents are very excited to see you, alright? Don't worry, I got you. Just try not to move your arm too much."
Thanks for this amazing submission! You have been shortlisted! For feedback; first of all the accent is wonderful, however, if you slow down your words just a little, it'll be even better so we can hear you more clearly. Screams and cries were wonderful. <3 (PS Eloise is pronounced El-oh-eese, Elias is Ee-lie-is. Hope that helps!
Thank you once again! It is such a pleasure to receive your feedback. I would gladly re-take the audition, if needed :)
Totally up to you whether or not you want to resubmit. I’m fine either way :)