I can tell you are trying to be Shoto. It's pretty good! The audio could be slightly clearer. I do hear a little static, but we could honestly work past that. You could use a little more emotion on the last line, and by emotion, I honestly just mean volume, since this is Todoroki we're talking about! Make it sound more like he's yelling. And my last comment would be the quality of your voice. Shoto's voice is a bit smoother.

Thanks for the feedback! I would definitely be willing to work with the criticism and make fixes! Would you like me to reaudition with the corrections?