Unchanging Love (MLPFiM fanfic adaptation)
blackcatbonifide for Orange Mint
Orange Mint is the disguise previously used by Firefly before she met Fine Roast. When Firefly feels her cover has been blown later in the story, she revives her old disguise and runs away for the night, before realizing she has to return to the cafe/home one last time to try to retrieve her love crystals without Fine Roast knowing. Orange Mint is a role of Firefly (Sweet Leaf), and so despite her small part in the story, she has to carry a lot of emotional weight until Firefly undisguises. Orange Mint has 22 lines.
[talking to herself, thinking about the love crystals she left under a floorboard in the bedroom closet] Stupid, complacent mare. I knew I should have kept them somewhere else. A bank deposit box, even.
[stammering after being caught in Fine Roast's bedroom] Oh, um, I-I'm sorry. I was looking for the restroom and I...
[Fine Roast has discovered her, but she hasn't undisguised yet; she refers to the love crystals she can't find] This is a trap, isn't it? You want me to go on a wild chase to try to find them and then they'll come in and- [skip ahead a few lines to where Fine Roast has asked her to show her real form...] What about the shop downstairs? I can't risk being found out by anypony else. I can barely believe I'm having this conversation with you.
So you had five auditions! Thank you very much for all five of your auditions.
This looked like too much fun, couldn't resist auditioning for more than one Pony:)
Azure Notion has finished listening to all of the Sweet Leaf/Firefly auditions. He's written feedback for all of them. Would you like to hear his feedback on your Sweet Leaf audition now, or would you like to wait until he has heard all of your auditions? And if you would like to hear his feedback (I won't force anyone to), would you like to be contacted privately on this site, by Discord, or another site?
Any feedback please send along in private message via this site/CCC. No need to send me any feedback notes unless it is because you wish for me to do a second/adjusted audition ie callbacks based on that feedback/instruction etc or if I am cast for a role and you have notes you want me to keep in mind for the actual final recording etc. If any such feedback is sent along, I'd be happy to get notes as available, or in a collected message, whatever is easiest for you and your team!
This was a really good read Bonnie! Nice job!
thanks:)))