Unchanging Love (MLPFiM fanfic adaptation)
Nightfire for Orange Mint
Orange Mint is the disguise previously used by Firefly before she met Fine Roast. When Firefly feels her cover has been blown later in the story, she revives her old disguise and runs away for the night, before realizing she has to return to the cafe/home one last time to try to retrieve her love crystals without Fine Roast knowing. Orange Mint is a role of Firefly (Sweet Leaf), and so despite her small part in the story, she has to carry a lot of emotional weight until Firefly undisguises. Orange Mint has 22 lines.
[talking to herself, thinking about the love crystals she left under a floorboard in the bedroom closet] Stupid, complacent mare. I knew I should have kept them somewhere else. A bank deposit box, even.
[stammering after being caught in Fine Roast's bedroom] Oh, um, I-I'm sorry. I was looking for the restroom and I...
[Fine Roast has discovered her, but she hasn't undisguised yet; she refers to the love crystals she can't find] This is a trap, isn't it? You want me to go on a wild chase to try to find them and then they'll come in and- [skip ahead a few lines to where Fine Roast has asked her to show her real form...] What about the shop downstairs? I can't risk being found out by anypony else. I can barely believe I'm having this conversation with you.
The emotion was spot on in this read! Nicely done!!
