The Morgue Files: S1: Case #2 (CLOSED)
TheMightyNoah for Aaron (Gang Member)
Please watch our explainer video and read the project description before auditioning.
Aaron is a supporting character with 37 lines for a total of 369 words.
He is a young member of the notorious Rollins gang. He's a no-good bully at the beginning of the story but develops a softer side later on. Aaron meets his fate at the end of the story. A few minor grunts will be added to the workload.
*Snarky, condescending, antagonistic*
"Is that booze, kid? (picks up bottle and snickers) You just can't stop stealing, can ya?"
*Nervous, worried*
"Come on, leave him alone. He already learned his lesson."
*Pissed off, antagonistic*
"I'm sure as shit not a MONSTER, like you. I'll tell ya one thing, Rollins better cut your ass loose - or I'm done."
You asked for feedback so I'm here to oblige! I'd say the first line didn't sound as snide as we'd like and the last line could use a little more edge. There's a certain fire to Aaron's character and that last line should best reflect that. I think I'm at fault since there's little emphasis on that detail. The second line was pretty much perfect. I'd say slightly faster pacing on the overall performance would be preferred as well. Your audio quality meets our standards but there were a few big gaps between audition lines. I'd recommend trimming those down a peg.
Thanks for the feedback! I'll give this one another shot