Oliver and Company 2
atmartinez008 for Lorenzo
Lorenzo is the secondary antagonist of the movie. He is a large Cane Corso who speaks with a soft Italian accent. He is viscous, cunning, sinister, thuggish and intelligent. While he is very strong he much prefers psychologically toying with his victims before finishing them off. He is incredibly loving to his owner Nancy and shows nothing but loyalty to her throughout.
I’m looking for a voice similar to Roscoe and DeSoto from the original. That suave but threatening tone is really what i’m after.
(chuckles) Heh-heh. Well, ain't this a treat?
Relax my pathetic little friend. See, I can't do anything unless my master says so.
Ooh. You're gonna wish you hadn't have done that.
You really brought the character to life with this audition. However, it isn’t really what we’re looking for in terms of tone. Lorenzo has to be quite suave and almost a kind of charming. You’re welcome to try again if you’d like. Maybe try lowering your pitch and focus on making the lines sound really threatening.
Excellent feedback! I'll do a retake and see if I can get closer to what you're looking for in a bit :)