Danganronpa: Dead End
Noflers for Ellis Albin
A young man with a monotone, mid to low pitched male voice. Nearly emotionless at all times, he values logic and facts over emotion and intuition. Not concerned with the feelings' of others, he is perceived as cold by many.
(Calm) “There’s no need to grieve over every individual battle. All that matters in the end is winning the war.”
(Cautious) “The way things are going, people will die. It’s best to consider if we have time for a countermeasure, unless it’s already too late…”
(stern) "This has gone far enough, we've moved past this being a game. Now, it's just slaughter."
Lines one and two are prefect my friend, line 3 though the delivery is a bit off, the direction for the line given is stern, however, of the 3 segments in line 3, the 3rd segment is the only one that properly conveys that, segment 2 has the word game go up which gives it a sort of mischievous, I'm enjoying this quality, when it should stay neutral or go down for a more solemn one, and segment 1 sounds more "I'm tired of your bullshit" than stern, though it is a fair interpretation
hey dazon thanks a bunch for the feedback ill keep these in mind thanks