Your Turn to Die: Fandub
Unii for Kanna Kizuchi
In-game, Kanna is shown to be a person that resembles "a little sister". She can be dependent and often relies on other people to help her out, due to the fact that she often believes that she is incapable of helping herself or others. Kanna is shown to be easily upset, and is one of the most vulnerable and unstable of the group.
(whimpering) "Ahhhhhhh.... OOooohhh...."
(on the verge of tears) "Ah... thank you very much."
(timid, still whimpering) "I'll say.... I'm Kanna Kizuchi."
(getting worked up) "After....I came here... My sister... My sister.... Ahhhh.. (start screaming) AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!! SHE'S DEAD! MY SISTER! WHY?! HOW?! IT'S MY FAULT! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!"
(calm, soft yet questioning) "Sara... I-I.. I just really wanted to ask you, about my sister. Please give me an answer.. Back then, could Kanna have actually save her sister..?"
I feel like you're really compressing your screaming and screaming is vital in this. The emotions are kinda there, but I feel like you're holding back. Also it feels like it's too young of a voice for Kanna. She's in middle school, but the pitch makes her sound more like she's 6 or so. Try maybe pulling back on the squeakiness and focusing more on giving it your all in terms of dynamics and emotion.
Thank you so much for the advice! I'll try it again real soon!