Your Turn to Die: Fandub
foreverfinn for Kanna Kizuchi
In-game, Kanna is shown to be a person that resembles "a little sister". She can be dependent and often relies on other people to help her out, due to the fact that she often believes that she is incapable of helping herself or others. Kanna is shown to be easily upset, and is one of the most vulnerable and unstable of the group.
(whimpering) "Ahhhhhhh.... OOooohhh...."
(on the verge of tears) "Ah... thank you very much."
(timid, still whimpering) "I'll say.... I'm Kanna Kizuchi."
(getting worked up) "After....I came here... My sister... My sister.... Ahhhh.. (start screaming) AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!! SHE'S DEAD! MY SISTER! WHY?! HOW?! IT'S MY FAULT! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!"
(calm, soft yet questioning) "Sara... I-I.. I just really wanted to ask you, about my sister. Please give me an answer.. Back then, could Kanna have actually save her sister..?"
You definitely have a grasp on her, but the emotion sounds inconsistent at times. Like in the "my sister" before the scream, to me that sounded kinda peppy. At this point, it really hits Kanna hard that her sister is dead and I didn't really get that from you. Also, there's some static in the background and it kinda detracts from the audition. The screaming is okay, but I feel like you're not going all the way. Screaming is vital to this game, as is the emotion, so you really need to go big. The pitch also sounds a little high, especially at the end. And at the end, it also seemed like you were rushing to finish and skipped over "Please give me an answer." It also sounds a bit too loud. You have potential though.
thank you so much for the feedback! i was trying not to peak the mic aha so i didn't do the scream as loudly as in previous auditions i recorded. thank you again though! i really really appreciate the constructive criticism bc i want to improve <3