Your Turn to Die: Fandub
Wispy Dreams for Kanna Kizuchi
In-game, Kanna is shown to be a person that resembles "a little sister". She can be dependent and often relies on other people to help her out, due to the fact that she often believes that she is incapable of helping herself or others. Kanna is shown to be easily upset, and is one of the most vulnerable and unstable of the group.
(whimpering) "Ahhhhhhh.... OOooohhh...."
(on the verge of tears) "Ah... thank you very much."
(timid, still whimpering) "I'll say.... I'm Kanna Kizuchi."
(getting worked up) "After....I came here... My sister... My sister.... Ahhhh.. (start screaming) AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!! SHE'S DEAD! MY SISTER! WHY?! HOW?! IT'S MY FAULT! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!"
(calm, soft yet questioning) "Sara... I-I.. I just really wanted to ask you, about my sister. Please give me an answer.. Back then, could Kanna have actually save her sister..?"
The emotion seems a tad lackluster, especially in the beginning; when she's whimpering, it sounds more like she's perpetually in a daydream as opposed to being stuck in a new and terrifying situation with complete strangers. The scream is pretty good in terms of volume, but I kinda feel like it doesn't entirely fit with the situation. Kanna's experience extreme anxiety and survivor's guilt and it's at that point it all catches up to her and smacks her in the face. While there's a little bit of that here, it sounds a little more like a horror movie scream. Going all the way, especially with the screaming, is vital to the game. It also seems like you were rushing it a bit and I really believe that it would work in your favor if you slowed down a little. Also the mic quality is lacking. Your voice doesn't really sound clear in this and I was only able to hear it out of one side of my headphones. I hope that helps.
It does help! Thank you so much for letting me know!