Kingdom Heart The [Fan Made] Anime Series Ep.2 & 3
srhadrna for Cinderella
Oh, well… What’s a royal ball anyway? (she stares out the window at the Royal Palace) After all. I suppose it would be frightfully dull and boring… and completely…completely wonderful.
(sad crying) It’s just that my friend’s made me the most beautiful dress, but my stepmother and stepsisters ruined it. And I was so looking forward to the ball.
Your Grace… Please wait. May I try it on?
that was really good just put more emotion in it and breath on the first line you say dull and boring like your just reading a script I know you are but that's not the point I want you to say it like dull, and boring okay line 2 I know I didn't put it down but she's sad so try crying in that scene nothing really wrong with it but how you can improve it is put Ephesus on the I may { I } try it on if that makes sense